lol liquidis told me to practice so i did.. Tell me wat u think

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eh the drawings are ok, but the story wasnt exactly a story, it was just abut a guy throwing a nade at a guy that then dies...

Can anyone give me ideas of a story

yeah.
make it different.
take existing clans (with their aproval of course)
and maKE a comic bout a tourament.

ugh make a story about a quest. like capture the flag

I think people should just stick with Liquids comics, all these people trying to make new ones!

yeah that was a bad first try, a capture teh flag story is always good =D

lol i think ill just read lxs ones.....

great drawings but the plot was a bit confusing

Yes, nice drawings, with a funny story it could be great.

wert, your avatar is strangly hypnotic 0.o

Lol, i know, someone said it yet... but it's funny!!

just sh|t

It's alright. You should make your plot a lot longer and definitely have it closely, closely tied to Soldat in all it's little ways. After that animation I submitted a while back, I won't make the same mistake twice. Don't give up, keep trying.

That was pretty awful, and pointless. I'm not going to discourage you though, keep at it and practice.

what the [:-censored] was that all about?!

is the main character holding some kinda Tommygun/pistol?
well, it's betta than M-comics

well give the idiot a chance man :P