This is my first map, I would like to hear everyone's opinion on this map. Let me know if u hated it or liked. I would also like to know what i can do to it to make it better. Map does support bots.

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Screenshots

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How about some screenies?

there u go

looks ok it is kinda rough, you need to smooth it out and get a different color background and those gay d12 things everywhere, if you like music make a thread don't put it all over a map thats just annoying, and the forums has a place you can upload picture in go to My page- My files and if you can't figure even that out then at least put all teh screens into one zip file

needs shading,.
and you should smooth the poly just like T said.
and another texture and background color.
but nice try for first map...
keep tryin'

eehh... no affence i have no comments but i looks [:-censored]ty. and sorry that i can't help you cuz i suck at map making...

Err.. Take the icons off, pt a bit of colour for the bg in atleast, smooth it out and shade it. Not so many clouds either.

Looks a bit rubbish.

I have CTF version of this map now, with less icons, the icons r there cuz that's the name of my clan. Also i don't c what's so wrong wit the black bg. I do not know how to smooth edges or whatever it's called. Someone needs to tell me how plz. My new version of this map also corrects the bot's path errors they have.

Too dark. Also, Don't post damm screenshots in zipped bmps!! grrr.

And post overviews (press print screen when zoomed out in the map editor, then paste in paint and save the file as a .jpg)




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k thx Wills59