Well this is my first attempt at a map...I know it sucks...I used to have stationary guns in it, but it ruined the map. That and I couldn't get them to be how I wanted them. BTW, The X's in the trench field have colliders, so watch where u throw ur nades.

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Yes the overview sucks, but u dont notice how bad it is when ur playing it. I also tried waypointing the bots, but they dont move...at all...



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quote:Originally posted by Kelba

Yes the overview sucks, but u dont notice how bad it is when ur playing it.



How wrong you are.

But nice try though. Keep at it.

Ehh, It needs work pretty good for first time :)

Some propositions from me:
I think there are too many open spaces on the left and right and the bunkers are way too big for the crosses that are/should be as high as the chest of a soldier (normandie, right?)
Your map really really really needs shading. This means that you should give different colors to the corners of the different polygons to achieve a 3D-ish look and add shadows and lights.
You should use some more scenery IMHO.

I think that's all from me :)

I suck at art. I will probably never get around to shading.

Shading is extremely easy.

Start off with 2 of the same color, then a third color

for example:
green
green
black

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Make poly's like this \/\/\/\/ with the black pointed down.

Then set colors to:
green
black
black

and connect the open spaces. I'm too lazy to show through screenshots, and you're lucky I even bothered typing this.

Good work, nice to see newcomers in gear, YOU COULD BE THE NEXT NUZZ!!!!!!!! LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Dont ever try this at home, anyone, that means you!)
(End resualts = Fatal :))

havent played it, but it looks like it could have great gameplay. Massive fight in the middle.

It's not bad for your first time, though i think there's too much free space, nice try anyways ;D

Who with the what now? What... Oh free space means on the map...
Ahh I SEEEEEEEEEEEE!
Lol first map is mad actaully, he deserbs a medal >_<

YOU COULD BE THE NEXT NUZZ!!!!!!!! LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Dont ever try this at home, anyone, that means you!)
(End resualts = Fatal :))

Haha, and thats supposed to be a good thing :o?^^^