I'm done with my first map :D
Its supposed to be a jungle, its small, tho. Some feedback on it would be greatly appreciated.

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looks okay, but you probably should post your first couple maps, cuz for most people they end up not being of high standard :/
[spoiler]6/11[/spoiler]<-your score.

i think it's ok for ur first map and so i'll give it a 7.5/10

Wow, imo, that looks awesome!
10/10

I agree with shirtman, this looks cool. 9.5/10 Looks a bit edgy though

Excellent map for a first try!
Although the edges are a bit sharp and you get stuck and you could probably shade it aswell for a better effect. I also think im missing some textures or scenery that you used.

Anyways its a great map.

The screen isn't working :/ Sounds good though...

[Edit] It works now, and looks really cool! :D

Thanks guys :D, I would like more of the gameplay plz ^_^

Shading is a bit weird, but good job!

7/10

nice layout, good sceneries but imo a bit too edgy and needs better shading. still, keep up the good work ;)

Screen's down. And I don't D/L if I dont see it.

imho ur type of shading makes the map look good :D (if it was shaded perfectly it wouldnt look as good imo)

10/10

Wow...I like the lay out. The only thing I don't like is the color/shading of the polys...maybe go back and make the sure the three corners are more uniform in color? Do that, and your map will look a lot better. Any bouncy/jagged polys in there as well? Those could be bad.. 7/10.

O umm ... Your over lapping of shading is ... flagrant. Or interesting I should say. Would I not give you a few commands, no?
Anyway nice map.

looks good.. it seems like there's some slight shading probs, though..

Very good for a first map :D like others said, its looking a bit sharp, but otherwise it's pretty good.

About the texture I have some doubts, because when designing the lev, I used testicle.bmp I got when DLing a level and it didn't seemed to be in Soap's Texture Archive so I thought that it would be better to stick with the regular stuff to avoid problems :/