woot, 2nd map.. but this time its a CTF.. the only critisism i know what i need to do next time is 1. More/better shading.. 2.More scenery/better layed out scenery.. if anyone else can give me some crits, it would be more then appreciated :D
This map is ideal for 6+ people. It was created with the theme of 'lava', so consequently i came up with a volcano.. I'm not entirely sure if there is custom scenery, but i have added some that i think could be :/
thanks to Felix for the name and text added to the overview :)

Overview - http://mr.netpub.org/soldat/soldatbeta/maps/screenshots/CTF_Volcan%20(final).PNG
Download - http://mr.netpub.org/soldat/script_downloadmap.php?id=53
(thanks Dephille for hosting - http://soldatpage.u13.net/ )

*EDITED* - please downlaod new file..

no it doesnt need shading work, but yet it looks like a rave with color lights and smoke in an underground club or something. it looks pretty wild. the moon is placed in a bad spot. if you think you need shading work then you can fix it but i think it is fine. your main problem is the background color. since its pretty much pure black it makes it look bad as for every map with black background. make the background a deep shade purple so it looks like it is night time if thats your goal. the scenery is all good except for moon in my opinion (dont know why). Overall it makes a killer ctf map. good space between the flags, good open space for air combat, few snipering places, and some "take cover" spots as well. gameplay good ^_^ good work

It looked nice the first time that i looked the overwiew, but when i played on it,
the game play wasn't very cool :/.
I think you should get off the moon, and put some stars, perhaps..
try different way.

Change the Bg's colors, and it will be fine :)

good work anyway XD

ok.. will change all the things, well change background colour and get rid of the moon.. i would add stars, but im not sure what scenery they are :/

anyway, thanks ALOT guys.. really apreciate the positivness of it..

edit - *done*, and found the stars scenery.. what do yall think now?

Your overview is down, but I just went to soldatpage and saw it.

Anyway, it looks pretty cool and fun and dang dark.

I could barely make out the outline of it 'cause it's dark, but it looks cool and fun.

Good job.

erg, if you play it, then you will see its not even that dark :/

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Quoting myself on SP forums - http://mr.netpub.org/soldat/forum2/viewtopic.php?t=23
Something i would change is the center of the volcano. It really isnt that obvious that it is a volcano ; i would make the middle with a large orange 'path' of lava leading to the top. Also shade the map like there is no light from the sky , but only th light from the lava , that will give it a very scary look and add lots of fun to it.

Grtz , DePhille

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good layout with something powerful.

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dark, if i can't see somebody moves i will leave the map immediately.
could be impossible to capture the flag in short respawn time if flag is there. the shelf outside is good for it.