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SCRIPT: Soldat: The Love Story
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KeFear
June 5, 2005, 5:14 pm
Here is a script i wrote some time ago for a soldat movie, but unfortunatelly never made. It needs a few nice maps which was hard to create. Originally i didn't want to release, only for the hungarian community, but now i made the english version, so i post it here. Maybe someone wants to make it as a movie sometime.

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Soldat: The Love Story


by: (RIA)KeFear
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PERFORMERS:
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-The boy
-The girl
-The seducer
-Policemen (3)
-The cashier
-some ppl in town and bank
-The devil

Introducing scene:
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In this scene we meet our hero and his love. They are bandits, and are
ready to rob the City Bank. We are in front of the bank, our sweet couple
talk to each other, then they enter the bank. They tell the cachier to hand
to them the content of the strong-box. But the fool alarms the cops, so he
must die. The policemen (3) arrive to the place, but unfortunately this is
the last day of their lives. Our heros leave the scene in a rush (after
"accidentaly" scuppering the workers and clients of the bank).

First scene:
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We are at the house of the boy, he and the girl are in each arms, in love.
They say goodbye, the girl leaves and the boy muses of love.

Second scene:
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The boy walks in the city while suddenly he sees his love in the arms of a
stranger, in an unmistakable situation. Our hero falls into dreadful rage and
decides to pay off the grudge on the seducer and the faithless (Please refrain from swearing).
He runs home like hell then returns armed with a fully loaded machine-gun,
and (in berserker mode! ;)) makes them not to ever do that again.
He shoots the dead bodies for a while (long respawn time! - with spas maybe),
then after he calms down a bit, throws his weapons and pees on the seducer,
then squats to his faithless woman and moans a little or something.

Then he lits a cigar and walks away like nothing happened.

Third scene:
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At the boy's house, the bell rings. Policeman came for our hero.
He seems to concede his fate, the cops take him out. But as they get out,
he drags his pistol out and dodging the cops, shoots them to death, then
he runs away.

Fourth scene:
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We are in the cemetery, his ex-girlfriend. He moans a bit at her tombstone
then in his ultime exasperation he comits suicide.

Final scene:
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He wakes up in hell, by the foots of the Devil. The Lord of Destruction tells
him that he died and now in The Hell. After that, the boy goes for a walk to
discover his new place.

In one of the scenes, he sees his dead love. They run to each other's arms.
Then the girl tells him that the "seducer" was her cousin. They are amused of
the things happened, then suffer together happily in hell until the ultimate
destruction of the world finally comes.

THE END.

Deleted User
June 5, 2005, 5:28 pm
omg. wtf. make a movie... id like to see...

Steel Kraut
June 5, 2005, 8:00 pm
Nice twist at the end, but I thought the cop killing was a bit unnecessary and it could have used more action.

Jamesmax0
June 5, 2005, 11:33 pm
I liked the script. I want to see this as a movie though :(

bond_james_bond
June 7, 2005, 9:39 pm
i wanna be da girl

Deleted User
June 8, 2005, 6:31 pm
...

o_o'

Swebonny
June 8, 2005, 8:07 pm
I wannabe a PoliceMan :D

Deleted User
June 30, 2005, 3:37 am
I wanna be da devil... :P

Deleted User
June 30, 2005, 4:20 pm
Nice one... carnage 'n' gore. I wanna be the seducer.

PS. We need a real girl for this. The cashier would be best to be a girl, too.