http://dyn.u13.net:6080/soldat/maps/urbancombat.PMS

i'm still working on getting the overview.

its a map where there are a few buildings on the ground. a small vally in the middle of the map, and in the air there are 4 plane like vehicles with guns on them.
its my first map, and if you dont like it or find a problem tell me and i'll fix it.

A screenshot would be nice.

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You're welcome.

You need to learn how to shade. VijchtiDoodah's Shading Tutorial.

You're welcome.

i said it was my first map, give me a break.

it was your first map. my first map was well-shaded. awh_reaper is trying to help, so respect that.

Don't put the moon so high up; no one can see it.

quote:Originally posted by thefuzzi said it was my first map, give me a break.
(Please refrain from swearing), that's the last time I try to be noob-friendly.

Meh. Take away those ?jets?fighters?bombers?

Capturing an urban environment in a map is very difficult. I'm releasing a map soon that has to do with that theme. When it's out you'll get an idea of how to shade and such.

I suggest you try to be a little nicer to reaper. He was, after all, giving constructive criticism. If you can't handle havign your map critiqued here, don't bother posting it.

I can respect that it's your first map. My first map was so (Please refrain from swearing)ty, i deleted it. Patience is teh key.