Name: ctf_oceanic
Auther: Jeyrad
Size: 40kb

Description:
A Map that has a bridge over water, or as i put it, the ocean :). It has nice shading and took me a good month or so to make and finish, but of course, i only worked on it for like a week out of the month XD. Enjoy! It contains a readme that has my email address for bugs, so refer to that to leave me comments or anything else ;).

Waypointed?: No, sorry ;)

Images:
Full Map: [URL]

Download:
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iz fun!

Not bad for a first map. You seem to understand most shading fundamentals. Some tips:


Use more polygons, there are some chunky spots on your map. Don't be afraid to use a few :)

Some of the walls could use a bit of thickness.

The bridge is a little too straight, perhaps make it sag in the center?

Otherwise, a nice first map.

How'd you know it was my first map? Actually it isnt, its my first non-climbing map, but yeah lol XD

Meh, probably because you have just 5 posts. ^.^
Yeah, it looks nice, but use more polygons, detail and sceneries next time.

Technically it's pretty good but it's a little campish.

I would change the background color to something darker. Also put more scenery on those lateral walls because they look very naked.

Not bad lookin at all I do see a lot of camper points though. A must have for campers.

Is the water made of polygons? If it's a scenery make it semi-transparent.

NJ for your first map, liek said before making the walls a bit thicker gives it less of the "bare bones" appearance. And yea a good camper map :P

Man... this is the almost the same layout you used in ctf_Landlocked.
I like it xD