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Major Edit: Okay, my connection seems to be back, and I've uploaded what needs to be uploaded so here it is:
CTF_Bottleneck
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Its a polyworks map, but I've waypointed it in MM+.
If you like it I'll release it. Comments welcome :)

Cool space i really like it! but u should consider making the polygons a bit thicker anyway..
And yeah! Its a bit open to..otherwise GJ! =D

Looks pretty good, but without a link for download my comments are limited. Looks devoid of much scenery, and kinda bland.

Yea, it is bare. Perhaps some sandbags or something.
Otherwise it looks pretty fun.

Ask, and ye shall recieve ;)
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I wasn't sure if the texture was custom or not so I put it in anyway.

Its a cool idea, but i thought you could have added some more detail to it. It looked pretty flat and lifeless to me. try making the background darker as well, it doesnt really fit the level well. I dont know if its your fault or Soldats, but it got a little bouncy on your map sometimes :P

Other than that, good job

Bouncy? I'm pretty sure there aren't any bouncy polygons. Polyworks is pretty good like that, but if your sure tell me where they are and I'll fix them.
I know that there isn't a huge amount of scenery, but the problem is what should I add? More crates? :P
The sky looks okay to me. It wouldn't look very good if it was much darker, trust me ;)

Yeah the bouncyness is probobly soldat being annoying. Find places where you think scenery would fit, try not to randomly place rondom things. It looks really bad, trust me on that one :P Does it all have to be 1 colour though?

Needs more polygons, and maybe you should close one or two routes off... There are a lot of them.

Also, perhaps you should add more scenery.

Looks like a face... :)

haha, it does too

Polygons are too pointy at the edges; round 'em off more, and put more scenery.

quote:Originally posted by The Geologist... without a link for download my comments are limited....

quote:Originally posted by Officer_BulbockAsk, and ye shall recieve ;)
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I wasn't sure if the texture was custom or not so I put it in anyway.


duhhhh...

quote:Originally posted by Keron CystPolygons are too pointy at the edges; round 'em off more, and put more scenery.

quote:Originally posted by The Geologist... without a link for download my comments are limited....

LEARN TO READ PEOPLE
quote:Originally posted by Officer_BulbockAsk, and ye shall recieve ;)
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I wasn't sure if the texture was custom or not so I put it in anyway.

I like it (especially the layout) it would be nice if you post it!

I Have!
Read the post above you ;)

Please edit your main post with the dl link then :)

It has way too many passages. If you want to make a layout like that, you need narrower tunnels, or less "mass" between two ways, so they count as 1, and not 2. Generally maps with more than 3 passages aren't much fun to play on :)

I made a very similiar map quite some time ago, and I'm planning on creating a re-make to enchance its graphics and fix its bugs. Sadly, the dl link is broken, but I hope the screenie will provide some information on what I mean by making a layout like that better.

I don't quite get what you mean...
You want me to delete those two big blocks in the middle that look like sunglasses?

No, I'm just giving you pointers in how to execute that layout in a much better way :)

HAHA kewl like the idea it liiks like a demented mario
o well nice map tjough fun 2

officer u in RAW or have u heard anything about it from the clan leader