ok this is my first map ever, it had an outline, and sum colour but no scenery or waypoints. the thing is though, its too big!!!! (well at least i think it is) here are sum screen shots:
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please tell me what you think and remember....this is my FIRST map!!

Screens... no lo veo.

Look at the shading. Where two polygons connect you put one vertex of one polygon darker but the adjacent vertex of the polygon next to it remains the same; they don't combine at all.

1) Too angular
2) Look at the shading, it isn't smooth. Keron already pointed this out though.
3) Colors other than white or grey are appreciated.

it looks like it has good gameplay, but thats not all it needs(most, but not all)

...Its to freaking big i think..with much space

ok i know about the shading...cause i cant use polyworks, its really hard to fix!!!! so if sum1 wants to download it and fix it up feel free to, if you do post sum pics....download here:
http://www.uploadtemple.com/view.php/1128883754.zip

why dont you put some scenery on the map ??

i erased this map and started the next one (see post called: ctf_jump)

this looks like,, 30% of a map..

Where are the edges? Where are the spawn points? Can you make a screen with the whole map in it? But since this is your first map its better than my first map.

by the way, I've noticed this in many of your maps... you use wayy to many nade and medikit spawns. Put them in special places, not in a thick layer aroun the level.