http://www.filelodge.com/files/hdd4/79964/inf_hiddendepths.rar

My first map please rate, there was spossed to be lighting in the middle and i tired to shade it

Overview - http://www.filelodge.com/files/hdd4/79964/hiddendepths.PNG

Thanx!

We need to see an overview of the map.

any scenery except the moon??

no..But iy nots supposed to have scenery its in a Abondaned factory place

lol :)

If it's an abandoned factory, then you should see lots of dust, maybe some rusty machinery (and rusty chimneys and rusty pipelines), spider webs, rats, some forgotten crates, one or two broken (lock-picked?) doors, some nasty graffitis (maybe done by the ones who broke in?), and lots of more scenery of the sort!
As you see, there is practically no context where a map should actually lack scenery.
If you want your map to be rated, try working out a bit more on that, and come back with a nicer map ;)

I'm kind of with OutofOrder here.. maybe a little more/extensive shading too :-)

With scenery it could be a nice map.
Try to give it life.

for now, i reccommend not using custom scenery untile you feel like you can make it look soldat-ish. but still, but some scenery in, maybe even some lianas to give it an ovrgrown feel.

The map looks too... ... "square"