This is my second map (1st was ctf_mud) and I hope that it is an improvement to my last map wich wasn't very good:( This is also my first attempt at shading so feedback on that would be good:) So please download and send me some feedback!
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Enjoy!

Omg man come on... change the bg colors they make the map look ugly =/
The shading is moderatedly good, but make it darker, and you should place sceneries better.

Pretty good to be your 2nd map!

yes, if youre bored of adding grass4, grass2, grass1, grass3 or whatsoever, use the texture called
"jablko" or pick a custom texture "crappo" for example and copy the edge of jablko and paste it in the textures/edges und rename the "copy of jablko" to crappo. Nice, grassy texture.

That is for 1.2 users.... 8-\

Keep working on your polys, they look very weird.

The polys where the flags are and the floating one uptop are ment to be all "pointy". Dont ask why I just basicly felt like it:)

lol...

I thought the background was fine but heres a better background for you. Its more jungle like.

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Well, at least this looks 70% better than the last one =)

Thanks every one!

The background was actually much better before, it looked like a natural dawn/dusk sky...
It only looked odd because the poly colour is a too highly saturated green.
I suggest you go back to the old background and just colour the polys with a more natural looking green.

ok thanks:)