here is my first map, it is called Ctf_two sides, i really need to know what i did good and what i did bad, so please rate it and give explanations to ur ratings :D

http://www.filelodge.com/files/hdd9/225748/Ctf_two%20sides.PMS

It needs screenshots

but cant u try it?? ill add some screenshots

http://www.filelodge.com/files/hdd9/225748/screenshot3.bmp
http://www.filelodge.com/files/hdd9/225748/screenshot4.bmp
http://www.filelodge.com/files/hdd9/225748/screenshot5.bmp

good, i remember me having loads of fun making my first map..and ofcource playing it with my friends (i made loads of secret camping places like unsolid walls xD). but unfortunately i lost it because my computer crashed and i had to reinstall it *sob* i shud ask my friends if they still have it. but hey, good job!

edit: just to add. simple maps are better!

An overview pic of the whole map would be handy. Just press the print-screen button while in the mapmaker program and copy past it into paint.
According to the screenshots it looks very good, I love the texture you've used. Shading, This map doesn't need much, but a little bit of shading would be nice. I've not played it yet, but it looks like the middle wall seperating the bases is to thin. People can now throw nades through the wall I think.
Overall, it's a very good first map, I love simple fast-paced maps like these. Keep 'em comming. ;)

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:P what was that?

I got the same thing that HHH did 2.

Topic locked, this isn't going anywhere.

Philip390, read this and make a new topic for your map.