This is my first map so dont hate me if it sucks:
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Heres a screenshot:
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Im prety sure that i put enough stuff in it for it to be ok, but if you have any suggestions please tell me i need as much help as i can get

try using jpg/png, not bmp

for some reason, the image won't load, half of it is black :/
what i can see, is ok, try using some shading ;)

thanks for telling me, I changed it

You created two topics for the same map? Not a wise maneuver, mi amigo.

Anyways, it's actually pretty good for a first. The white outlines in that picture confused me a bit, but I caught on a few minutes later x), try shading and such. Go to sml.u13.net for some PW tutorials.

BTW, Welcome to SoldatForums :)

Well, pretty entertaining to be your first map. Although grenade spam would be abused here, but still it's fun. I see that you colored the polys and add some scenery, a little bit of shading would be really good, remember, the shading on a map depends on the placement of the polygons ;)

Welcome to the forums, and keep mapping!

I shaded it, so if you want the shaded version its ready to download.

thanks for the advice guys

wow, this is acually a nice map, although basic shading, it looks great :)

now this is better! it just needed a new texture and a different bgcolor, that's all! sometimes the smallest differences can make a map great.

my reccomendation would be to put lianas over the central structure.