Yes this is my little comic I made, I dont know if its super fun but lets see what u think...

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I dont know what makes that a comic...

look again

its ok

Well, I thought it looked good...but I think that you should make it one big image (even though it'll be like 1MB) and upload it at somewhere like Angelfire.

The graphics are good, and the storyline is ok. Good job. :)

Lol, poor poor roy......

I think it looks better like this:
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umm... right...
that wasn't that funny. but the graphics are ok.
maybe you should illustrate a comic that somebody else writes the script for.
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hey waddya know, i just so happen to have a nice script lying around, maybe ill send it to ya zero

this is beyond lame


EDIT maybe i did not stress my point enough. The comic is beyond lame

The graphics suit a soldat comic IMO
I just dont like how the brutalkill was drawn... Brutalkill is often more of a minor explosion or... implosion of the character. They fall to pieces!

The script is so-so. Its not bad... but its not as inspired as some of the stuff we've seen.

I dont get it, but i like how u made it :D

storyline was kinda short and weird but graphixxxxxxx were ok

LOL, I liked it

I agree.

Nice comic, i likey.

BTW, it's "Weird".

the I before E rule is complete horse shiite

Well I did make this comic when I was bored, so maybe a little boring thing followed it in the comic, but I will try to make better next time in Part 2.

Me like what me see! It's funny cause it's true.

Hehe, it is good! Well done Mr Z!

I Cant Wait 4 the second one!

Hehe, and post the next one using [ IMG ] tags