"What is whit this letter? Make all the necessery changes in the letter below."



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Thanks for any help [;)].

Dear Clare
Thank you very much for yout letter. It wasn't interesting to hear from you. I don't give a [:-censored] if you like your new job and if you like Bristol, neither if people at work are friendly.
It's so nice here in Carlise without you! Robert and Ann didn't do anything, so i spent most of sunday in bed with an hot chick!
I don't know why i would want to know what's the weather like in Bristol, but i'll bother you with the local weather instead .. OMG IT'S SO HOT!!!1! I hope it will rain in Bristol.

Goodbey



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I wonder if the authors of this couldn't come up with something better -.-

dude switch school fast

Oh come on dude that's sp easy, pay attention in class next time.
Let me list some things:

Your adress goes in the top right
"Dear Claire" goes on the left margin
1 space between the opening and the body
1 space between all paragraphs
closing needs to e almost all the way to the left
then 4 spaces then his name
shud end with sincerely or somthing like that
g2g dinner
bye
lol

Hahahah ...y0da... funny topic. I can't help you because I'm not very good in english.
By the way: nice signature CBW.

Thanks; tbfg made most if it for me.

looks like a heck of a lot of spelling mistakes, and y0da are you still in elementary school? cause if you're in high school, i'd switch to a dif. one fast to get a better education. heh ;)

I'm 13, and this thing was for fu ckin A! [;)] I've done it my own way... Couse Meandors was... not good. [;)] We have first time english in school! My english is becouse of Cartoon Network, my uncle who was in UK and books. From the fourth class (10) we haved german! So stupid - no offence. Der, die, das, dem, den etc. [xx(]

oooo now i get it, you usually dont speak english, silly stupid americans! :)

Im not good at english so I can't help [:D]

why would he ask for people hes never met to proofread english for him if he lived in an english speaking area? so many members here aren't first rate english speakers, you silly stupid american!

quote:you silly stupid american!


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Country: USA

no i mean really helped him in a correct and accurate way..

It was lovely to hear from you - Instead of "It was lovely to here from you".

We all miss you here in Carlise - Instead of "We are all missing you here in Carlise".

Goodbye - Instead of "Goodbey".

These were the technical mistakes I found. There are other stuff that you will never use in your life but will have to check for in good essays, then again you're still 13 and I dont think they give hard essays up untill 10th grade.

lol

Am i a freakin' american??? Man! Your drunk?

I Don't need English! I'm never going to England!!!